Rough Draft of I Poem

This is from the character’s perspective. Informational entry coming soon.

Draft of I Poem from character point of view

2 Comments

  1. cc57241 said,

    February 21, 2008 at 5:34 pm

    Thanks for your comment..I’m so glad you like it! Yours is great too..maybe you can somehow make it informational and kill two birds with one stone! Keep up the good work :)

  2. secondolphin said,

    February 27, 2008 at 4:11 am

    Jaime,
    I liked your I poem. I like the way that you brought in the parents singing. That was a major part of the story.
    Christy


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